Our last speech was a very productive one, and I am glad that it was persuasive. I believe that persuasive speeches are simple and fun because you get to let people know the speaker’s opinions and try to convince people to implement a solution. During this speech, I was surprised that I felt content in front of the audience because I usually get unbelievable stage fright. I put in more practicing time for this speech, so I suppose that’s what made me feel more comfortable. In the beginning, however, it was obvious that I was nervous. I took in a few breaths like our professor mentioned and that really helped my delivery. Because of my comfortableness, my confidence was also boosted. Giving myself extra time to practice allowed me to memorize some of my main points. Although I still had to look at my note cards for several sub points and references, I felt that my confidence was good and the audience noticed that.
I believe I achieved the purpose of my speech very well. In fact, I thought it was better than my other two speeches. My purpose was clear and simple, and I believe the solutions that I made available truly supported my overall purpose of this speech. My purpose was also supported by the five citations that I included. I am glad that I got to incorporate the three informational books that I found from the library into my speech.
I felt that there were a lot of different things that I improved on in this speech. In my last two speeches, I found myself shuffling around because I was overcome with nervousness. However, I was stationary in my last speech, and I only moved when I needed to switch slides. I also noticed that my eye contact was much better, and I received good comments about it from my peers. I would rate my eye contact as a nine in this speech because I only looked at my note cards for references or when I lost my train of thought for a split second. I believe stuttering was not a good thing, especially when I started this habit in the beginning of the speech and near the end. I felt like it was ineffective and the audience might have thought that I was extremely nervous. I think that stuttering near the end of the speech made it seem like I was in a rush to finish.
While watching the video of my last speech, I felt like my facial expressions were a bit distracting. I noticed that I wrinkled my forehead when I wanted people to know that I am truly stressing something, but I believe I could have toned that down. People might have thought it was overly dramatic. I also felt that I had held on to my note cards strongly, which could have detracted from my overall delivery. The audience probably thought that I was extremely nervous because of this “death grip”.
On a scale from A-F, I would give myself an A because I was confident of my solutions. I felt like I thought it through and did extensive research. I also felt like my eye contact was great, and I was not afraid to look at people in the eye. I was able to not look back at my Power Point, so I think that should have boosted my grade. I believe this speech was better than my last speeches because I knew what to expect. I knew exactly what to do and what not to do. Instead of forgetting my visual aid, which was what I did in my first speech, I actually remembered it this time thanks to the convenience of email. Overall, I just felt good about this speech because I gave myself enough time to work on it, which made this one the best one. Although I felt nervous at first, I knew that this was going to be my best speech because I took in the time to practice and do research. If I had to do this speech over again, I would probably change some of my solutions. I felt like most of my solutions were over done for the prevention of teenage pregnancy, and I could have thought of more eccentric solutions. However, these were the solutions that the books provided me with, and I was determined to refer to the books as much as possible to support my claim.
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